Hi there, my name is Noah and I am a student in room 12 at New Windsor School. I really like how Sofia wrote a sentence that ended with a full stop and made sense. It made me think of the learning I am doing with sentences. We are learning to add exciting words to help make a picture for our reader. Have you thought about putting words in your sentence that tell your reader how fast you run?
So proud of our young, new writers. Well done Room 1!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely class:) Harley has gotten a big progress in writting and speaking!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Erin :)
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Noah and I am a student in room 12 at New Windsor School. I really like how Sofia wrote a sentence that ended with a full stop and made sense. It made me think of the learning I am doing with sentences. We are learning to add exciting words to help make a picture for our reader. Have you thought about putting words in your sentence that tell your reader how fast you run?
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